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Okay now. I'd like to try something if any of you would be willing; I'd like you to try and tell me what you think the back story is behind the picture.....like, what you think is going on.....it doesn't have to be long or anything....I'll give you mine to start off:

My idea is that of corruption; this picture shows Spock and Kirk as angels. Kirk has already fallen (hence the black wings....) and has been for longer than he remembers. He and Spock meet and they become friends, but Kirk begins to rub off on Spock and he starts to loose his innocence and wants to be with Kirk and be able to explore.....he asks permission to leave, but is punished....for leaving heaven isn't something that people ASK to do. He is injured and dazed so falls. The reason Kirk is crying is because he's worried (obviously) but also that he feels guilty...

Luckily in my version Kirk catches Spock before he goes SPLAT upon the floor. =D

……I’m so obsessed with Kirk and Spock right now….tis silly really coz I’d have no motivation to do anything like this with my own characters. Fufufufufufu~

OTHER AWESOME IDEAS OF AWESOME:

:icondrwhofreak: ~Spock has been really hurt (phsically and emotionally) and is in the Vulcan version of a coma. Kirk initiates a mind meld with Spock and Kirk finds that in his mind Spock is just falling, falling, falling, so kirk flies down after him and tries to stop him falling but when he reaches him he realises that now Spock is dragging him down and he is falling too and he doesn't know how to stop....

:iconpsychoticbb: ~ Kirk asks Spock to save him from corruption- surely someone as pure and strong as him should easily be able to save just one dark angel. However, there is somehow a mix up and Spock's weak side is shown- making Kirk realise that he's not as indistructable as he pretends to be and that it's quite possibly Spock that needs saving not him.......

:iconinsanityforever: ~ The angel wings are metaphoric; the black is because Kirk's not as pure as Spock... He admits everything to Spock; including the fact he loves him, which is tinting his wings more than anything (guilt and fear) and Spock just takes his hand, and tells him everything through his mind.....but Spocks not sure if he could deal with a relationship with someone who purposely brings out his emotional side so much.....

:iconda-kasha: ~ Their ship has been destroyed and they're dying - but they're dying together...

:iconraka73: ~ Spock and Kurt are angels, and obviously, angels go to heaven. Spock sinned and is going to down to hell. Kirk thinks "If he's going, I'm going with him," so they're both going to hell. Spock is bleeding because he got in a fight and Kirk is crying because he doesn't want Spock to go.

:icondawnofthedusk: ~ Kirk had been a rebellious angel in the need of exploration, and as he disobeyed God, he'd been cast away. Jim Kirk has been wandering through limbo, earth, space, and hell for years upon years now, alone. That is, until he meets Spock. This angel has been an obedient and loyal servant of the heavens for many a generation. As he meets the fallen angel, new feelings develop. The both of them meet often, now, until the two of them realize what the feelings were. Love. When the Lord discovers such, He becomes outraged. Love between two of the male gender is forbidden and looked down upon with great ferocity. Spock logically defends his feelings to no avail, and is struck down from the Heavens mercilessly. Kirk sees him falling, crying out in horror at the injuries of his lover. He does not know how to save him, nor if he can.
End- Happy: Kirk begins to panic, seeing the end coming near for Spock. He takes a deep breath, hugging his love close, and flaps his wings hard, grunting at the weight of the both of them. Slowly, he lets them fall back to the ground (wherever the hell that is.) Jim tends to Spock's wounds, finding that the other's pure wings were completely gone now, replaced with small, bare black ones. He frowns in guilt and as Spock awakens, they live in eternity with only each other, wandering the plains of existence.
Angsty: the already fallen angel is stricken with terror and worry. What was he to do? They were heading towards death quickly and surely. He knew his strength was not great enough to save them both, but he knew he could not live without Spock. And so, he brings them closer, kissing gently onto Spock's lips as they spiral down to darkness, with only each other.

:iconphotontorpedo: ~ they're on the ship when like any other episode something strange happens or comes aboard. Somehow they end up in some sort of virutal reality/coma situation (whether they know it or not) with some sort of alternate situation. While time barely passes on the ship, in their "world" time goes by. In their alternate world something epic happens that may or may not be related to what happens on the Enterprise, but it ends up with something like Spock is dying (Or Kikr thinks he's dying) and so on.

:iconbeachballotaku: ~Angels all have their emotions controlled, in order to resist the sins that go along with it. That is why Kirk left being an angel, Spock began to see the good in emotion, and for his punishment he was robbed of his emotions.

:icontrekkieandproud: ~Jim has just told Spock of his feelings when the ship's attacked. Much like his father did, Jim sends everyone off the ship on shuttles. But he, as a good Captain, goes down with the ship. A couple of years later rumors are going around in Hell (where Jim ended up in) that the Enterprise's captain has just died. Jim knows that Spock would have been Captain and that he's forbidden from going up to Heaven. He has a friend who got in for practicing magic to change his appearance. Once he's unreconisable he 'dies' and goes up to Heaven. Since no one has ever tried before nobody suspects anything. When he sees Spock he loses his concentration and everyone can see that he doesn't belong. When the Lord finds out he banishes Spock as well for loving Jim. Jim panics when they're falling because Fallen Angel's wings never work unless they're intentions are pure, but he tries anyway. They come back to the real world and hang out with the crew as ghosts until one day Jim masters the art of becoming real for periods of time, which he uses to be part of the crew again.

:iconlittlebixuit:~ The wings can be seen as both metaphoric and real (so they would actually be angels). Kirk's are black because he has done a great sin by falling in love with Spock, therefore he had to be punished, was banned (from wherever) and not a real but an angel of a sin. With Kirk gone, Spock realized just how much his Captain meant to him and that he was, as well, in love with Kirk. Just as his love, the decision to punish and ban Spock was made and now he's on the verge of becoming an angel of a sin, the only thing keeping him from falling into this black pool of sin is Kirk, who has endured the pain of being an angel of a sin and can not let the same happen to his beloved Spock.


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ispeekrandom's avatar
heres how i see it the color of the wings doesn't pertain to good and evil white is for angels who have wisdom to give to others black are the pranksters each people who need them get a set of angels to guide him/her but there are huntes who have found out about them they see the white wings as rare and priceless but the black ones as worthless the hunters will do whatever they can to bring the angel with the white wings down to earth to sell the fethers jim is not hurt because they learned that if you kill one the other dies so the hunters are trying to bring spock to earth to heal him and sell fethers as long as he lives and jim is tryig to save him